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empty smile
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missing teeth
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To maa, hope she has her mari-on still available
Her smile is filled again now
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You're very good with these haikus. I haven't really tried many, but I know that I don't do well with them lol
Beautiful, as usual, Mari.
- namita
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Piano
with missing keys
child smiles
my take on your haiku... lovely sentiment/image
Rainbows,
~RJ~
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I liked this one ever so much -it is so kinda cute-
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No wait, the other way around, starts like the sunset but rises like the moon...ignore me, I mean I like your smile.
sunset to
moon rise--
mariza's smile
Work on it for me.
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moon rise
and sunset--
mariza's smile
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moon shines
in your eyes
her smile
thank you so much for the lovely thoughts and for the moon
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Wow, it's spectacular!
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near toothless
grapes pop in
with only a smile...
Hugs...Eddy
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hahaha, yes, you bet that the switch on mari is still on ...
amazing ...
thank you for this very special dedication, sweetie ... I love it !
ps. I'm starting my haiku-class, so I will soon be able to respond appropriately
mari -on
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ooh, like the illusion of an empty smile in this one sweet mommer
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what's the l00l mean? Is it some evil code...oh yes I remember it's the toothless grin. You aren't all there you know.
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what a sesne opf humour you have, gpt me thinking now about zebra's crossing erm, zebra crossings, nice one
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Must be toothless zebras!
Thanks Tony
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write a haiku about Yem's pink flamingoes...they'll show up as his face image soon
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flaming goes
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cute...I've seen the Flaming Goes before...the alternate name for It!
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I would never, ever, in all my life write such a thing! I'm the essence of discretion, the prime example of decency, the creme de la...oh to heck with it...the photo was funny.
I'd do one of those morphs for me but it would seem like time was standing still...I just never get any older....nope...not...any..ol...are you buying this?
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