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maa's smile






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empty smile
on her child's face
missing teeth


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To maa, hope she has her mari-on still available
Her smile is filled again now

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  • Namita
    March 1, 2008

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    You're very good with these haikus. I haven't really tried many, but I know that I don't do well with them lol Beautiful, as usual, Mari.

    - namita


  • Rj
    February 28, 2008

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    Piano
    with missing keys
    child smiles

    my take on your haiku... lovely sentiment/image

    Rainbows,
    ~RJ~

  • a u r a
    February 27, 2008
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    I liked this one ever so much -it is so kinda cute-

  • Yemassee silver member
    February 26, 2008
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    No wait, the other way around, starts like the sunset but rises like the moon...ignore me, I mean I like your smile.

    sunset to
    moon rise--
    mariza's smile

    Work on it for me.
  • Yemassee silver member
    February 26, 2008

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    moon rise
    and sunset--
    mariza's smile


    • MariGoes gold member
      February 27, 2008
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      moon shines
      in your eyes
      her smile

      thank you so much for the lovely thoughts and for the moon
  • Just4u
    February 25, 2008

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    near toothless
    grapes pop in
    with only a smile...

    Hugs...Eddy


  • maa gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    hahaha, yes, you bet that the switch on mari is still on ...
    amazing ...
    thank you for this very special dedication, sweetie ... I love it !

    ps. I'm starting my haiku-class, so I will soon be able to respond appropriately


    mari -on


  • leander Moderators member
    February 25, 2008

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    ooh, like the illusion of an empty smile in this one sweet mommer

  • Yemassee silver member
    February 24, 2008
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    what's the l00l mean? Is it some evil code...oh yes I remember it's the toothless grin. You aren't all there you know.

  • Titanium gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    what a sesne opf humour you have, gpt me thinking now about zebra's crossing erm, zebra crossings, nice one


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    February 24, 2008
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    write a haiku about Yem's pink flamingoes...they'll show up as his face image soon

  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    February 24, 2008

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    I would never, ever, in all my life write such a thing! I'm the essence of discretion, the prime example of decency, the creme de la...oh to heck with it...the photo was funny.

    I'd do one of those morphs for me but it would seem like time was standing still...I just never get any older....nope...not...any..ol...are you buying this?

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