Nature is all around me,
I can see it,
smell it,
feel it,
hear it
and sense it.
Flowers blooming,
butterflies fluttering around them,
the bees roaming around,
hungrily searching for
their precious nectar
Nature has brought colour into my life,
It's something to think about,
when you're down,
and instantly,
it will bring you back up.
Author notes
Inpiration: Picture One- http://www.ndesign-studio.com/images/portfolio/illustration/nature-1.jpg
The most beautiful thing in the world is nature.
A contest entry
- Nature Themed Pic Contest by liduen.
600 points, ended March 1, 5 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Write down what you brain says...
Comments
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congratulations on the HM. I agree about nature. I didn't look at the prompt but sunshine and fresh air always bring a new perspective.
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i totally agree nature rises you up when you are down thank you for sharing this poem with the group
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Commented on this one before you put it in this reading list. Nice to read it again though.
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Hmm I've commented on this before. Enjoyable the second time around as well!
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Nature definitely is something that has the ability to lift your spirits. I think thats why Spring is so encouraged after Winter has taken its toll. Thank you for sharing this with the group.
animated
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Nature is most certainly a wonderful pick-me-up and spirit lifter. Thank you for sharing this with the group.
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Nature is all around us; and we often take it for granted, not even thinking about the beauty of it and how it affects us in the long run. It certainly can bring us up if we are down in the dumps.
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wow i love this poem flowers blooming butterflies fluttering aruond them the bees roaming around hungrily searching fot there precious nector i agree that nature instantly brings you up when you are down beautiful thankyou for sharing this with the group
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congratulations on the HM. Nature can certainly be wonderful medicine. Today it is so beautiful here. The sun is out, the sky is blue and I want to get out and plant flowers...but I fear I must wait till I am sure there will be no more frost. Winter is a prankster that I have seen before. My fruit trees are in bloom and I'm afraid
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Love the concept
I have one suggestion. Go deeper. Take your five senses and explore every nook and cranny. What do you see in the microcosm and the macrocosm. What scents waft through the air. Minutely, describe the cacophony, or the orchestra of sounds that greet you. Let me know what you touch and how it feels in your hand. It's a good poem, now. I'd like to see a rewrite.
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This is beautiful
I love nature!! It is so important in each of our lives! Well done with this!
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wowwwwwwww sis this is a blastt i adore this bigtime could lucks in da contest
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A lovely poem about nature, and its appeal to all the senses and the soul.
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beautifully written from the picture with such a strength and sense in your words well done with this
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hey there
very nicely written piece.. ya Nature's tranquility is so overwhelming that it vanishes all your pain and difficulties in a flash.. it gives such an immense pleasure to be close to Nature.. thanks for sharing..
God bless ya..
Neha
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Very nice. I especially like the last stanza. Good luck!
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