Leave you to your own,
I'll give my best advice.
Kiss your bleeding lips
to covering up my sighs
Pull your life support
maybe shoot across the sky.
Find a place to live,
lost a spot to hide.
Playing in the rain
all I do is scream,
tearing with these words
and ripping at the seems.
Losing touch with sanity,
going out my mind.
Threatening to leave
afraid to ever fly.
Growing round and round
getting closer to the ground,
speak to you in tongues
religion at it's best
staring at the sun
spend quarter, nic and dime
what does it stand for?
I just can't find the time
fall in love with falsehood
or get caught up in a lie.
Giving eskimo kisses,
breaking flutter by wings
listening to whispers
drinking in the moonlight
Hush and give best wishes
I'll make everything alright
Author notes
Each line has a specific subject matter. Some lines share a subject.
A contest entry
- My Life Line... by Condemd RyeZing.
525 points, ended April 22, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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It's great. I like the metaphors. It's a very emotional piece. Nicely done.
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This is my life line.


