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The Ephemeral Vision

Rising from the swirling sands
A Wooly mammoth proudly stands
The ephemeral vision nature created
Can never again be ever repeated

A contest entry

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  • pantress silver member
    March 12, 2008
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    The ephemeral vision nature created
    Can never again be ever repeated

    How true this line is. Like a snow flake. Will never be duplicated. Poweful statement. I've stared and I cannot see the wooly mammoth as hard as I look.lol. thanks for your entry and best of luck in my contest. Jennifer


    • deep space
      March 13, 2008
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      dont worry its there,its the first thing i noticed with its huge ears


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    February 25, 2008
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    wooly mammoth eh how inspiring.. i like this good luck xx peter