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Passion's Takeover.

The feel of your lips to mine
...Simply bliss.
I am already so addicted
...to your kiss.

Your fingertips,
They leave burning trails
Of fire and passion
Gods, I love your nails

Your eyes,
Express so much,
And I quiver
From your touch.

You make me tremble
With one glance
You fill me with
Utmost romance.

I love you
More than words can say...
And I'll continue to show you that.
Day after day.

For I refuse to leave your heart
And I never wish to part.

You're a part of me
The salt to my sea.

So hold me,
And never let go?
For we can forever keep,
This passion aglow!

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BEA I love you.

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  • Patience is a Virtue
    February 29, 2008
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    Have I mentioned that I love this poem? Because I do. Almost as much as I love its writer.


  • Neha Kaushik
    February 24, 2008

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    Beautiful

    A very well written piece.. sweetly deep and passionately desirable.. it reflects your love..
    Loved the lines ::

    You make me tremble
    With one glance
    You fill me with
    Utmost romance.

    God bless you..