Awashed and renewed,
i rise from evolutions bed.
Oh bedevilled phantom,
my mantle i will shed.
An apparition, witnessed by you?
Nay truth i am but flesh.
I will walk amongst you,
precursing your awful death.
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photo by jennifer aka Pantress@AP
All rights reserved .
Not to be used without permission.
A contest entry
- picture prompt --- use your imagination by pantress.
600 points, ended March 12, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Fabulous
This is exactly what I saw, you hit it dead on... thanks for entering in my contest and for being my very first contestant, ever. Best of luck. Jennifer -
An awesome write here Peter
I loved this write and the pic is truly great
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thank you pat,, i enjoyed writing it xx hugs
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Wow what am amazing write. Wonderful imagery and emotion. Good luck in the contest
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thanks so much,,i enjoyed the prompt and felt i had ro write something best regards peter
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Ah yes,you have eyes to sea!!!!!! Excellent my dear friend.i wish you all luck in this contest.a great picture isn't it, Ros
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thank you gwen,, i enjoyed this contest the wonderful photo xxx hugs xxx
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Great imagination...love it...
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well-done
like the "presursing your awful death idea" and you shedding your mantle image
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Exquisite!!
beautifully written.. and a very good take on the prompt.. your imagery is simply amazing.. loved the way you've portrayed the things.. good luck for the contest..
God bless ya.. -
My very first contestant. Thank you for entering. I am saving my comments to the end so as to not give any clues to 'what I may see'. But since you were my very first, you deserved to be recognized. Best of luck to you.
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