my world, my wife, a flutterless bird
who crawls away under my tyranny
in unexpected prose she regenerates,
but i am always taking,
nonconsentually raping
i am always breaking
i am always screaming in her ear,
"dont cry, bitch!" flat on her back
she looks up at me,
but i dont meet her eyes...
Author notes
im not completely satisfied with this, might add more later
A contest entry
- Let's Talk Politics by xXblackenedXroseXx.
600 points, ended April 1, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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oh and I don't really think more should be added. I think that's a perfect ending.. and kinda leaves the reader left to think.
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this is short but so very powerful. I'm kinda speechless. Great job.
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Hmmmm, I'm out on this one, I get the meta's but.....
I think it needs more, it is in good form and interesting indeed, it needs to be longer.
I like it.
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