Maple bacon
embracing pancakes
now asphyxiated by
life's blueberry syrup
Author notes
Prompt-Breakfast
10 words
I am now officially hungry!
A contest entry
- Quickie for Breakfast? - PIF by And Hyetal.
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Comments
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Very short, but great use of metaphor if you ask me.
I definately like the originality you have in this one
Leander -
What an absolutely brilliant life metaphor this is. I would have never thought to roll with pancakes on this. I love this
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Wonderful use of metaphor for this short piece. I love the line 'Life's blueberry syrup' Very original!
Thank you for entering.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Methapors oh my. Breakfast and life, go hand in hand here. Beautiful job may I say.
Maple bacon
embracing pancakes -
oooh, I like the metaphor here! It's great...all with sugary syrup on top. ^^
Great write and thank you for entering!
~Cassie
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Your welcome, I had some great inspiration...
..and thank you for your wonderful comment..
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