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Let The Sun Shine!!!

Let the Sun Shine
Let the Sun Shine IN
The SUN...shine in!!!
YES!!! I borrowed this
from a  VERY well known musical
but I think it still applies today
so let YOUR sun shine in and let mine
let's all reach out to give and receive WARMTH!!!

Author notes

chanting in the warm weather now and always

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  • abuyi
    April 14, 2008
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    lol.. yeha i agree let the sunshine in


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    I do like that old song you got the idea for this poem from - great suggestion - hope it is sunny and warm here today - we still have lots of snow around - spring has not sprung here yet! Have a great day!


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    I enjoyed this. This mantra is very uplifting and BRIGHT like your page here. LOL. Great message. - cgirl0410


    • simpliciti
      February 25, 2008
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      thank you so much

      thank you so much for your support, I'm glad you enjoyed this and I'm very new to writing poetry!!!!