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Egg and Toast
Bacon and Sausage
Breakfast special at IHOP

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  • jewlinz
    February 25, 2008

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    I like how you didn't go like;
    Sausage
    bacon
    eggs
    toast
    you put in into more of a form than that. good job!
    Linz


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 25, 2008
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    hehe
    Lots of people order that.
    Nicely written, sweetie.

    Love ya
    Mark

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    Woo Hoo Darling congrats on your Hm I see you were thinking of Uncle Mark this morning Love you loads


  • N e a r
    February 24, 2008

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    I think I ate at IHOP once. :P I prefer Dennys, but as long as its breakfast, I'm good. This poem makes me hungry, but it's nighttime here. Nicely written, sis. M a r l u x i a


  • Hope Angel silver member
    February 24, 2008
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    So cute! Congrats on the HM!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 24, 2008
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    LOL Love IHOP.
    Can I go next time


    Delila


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    hehe this is a fun write and made me smile. I never eat breakfast because I am naughty well done on the honary baby girl

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    February 24, 2008
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    Sounds like a yummy breakfast to me.
    I love IHOP. Thanks for sharing. Well done.
    Love Daddy


  • And Hyetal
    February 24, 2008

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    Love the last line. Definately brought life to such a short poem.

    Great write, and thanks for entering!

    ~Cassie

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