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Diner Delight

inhale...
...savor,
crisp bacon
buttered toast
...salivate,
offer thanks...eat!


A contest entry

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  • individuality gold member
    March 3, 2008

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    now i will have to raid the fridge

  • Westley
    February 24, 2008
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    That's what I thought, hence the 'but' being strange as we'd usually use it to mark a change in direction or contrast, etc. I suppose it makes sense if we then read the dear as 'dear to me' though. I am being pedantic (I teach English you see)!

    Take care and thanks for writing back.

    Regards,


    Westley


    • butterflywriter
      February 24, 2008
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      think this is posted on the wrong poem...

      but anyway, Happy Sunday!


      • paulcreates silver member
        February 24, 2008

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        nu-uh see there's a "but" in "buttered"....
        *runs before she kicks me in the buttered toast*

        Cowboy


        • butterflywriter
          February 24, 2008
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          funny boy....

          now I'm totally confused, what the Sam H*ll are you BOTH talking about? Or do you know?


  • And Hyetal
    February 24, 2008

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    mmmmmmmmm...

    hungry.

    Great imagery here, I enjoyed the read. Thanks for entering!

    ~Cassie

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