Heart attack fuel
all fried in fat
I enjoyed that
Author notes
quickie contest.
A contest entry
- Quickie for Breakfast? - PIF by And Hyetal.
450 points, ended February 24, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ah yes, you can't beat a good fry-up. Witty, pithy words you've penned here. I saw something on TV the other day, saying lard is ok to cook with. I wish these experts would make up their minds!


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Oh yea!!! Nothing tastes quite as good. It's such a shame that the government had to go and do all those studies and now everything good will kill us!


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Loved the last line! I also like how the second and last lines rhymed... Added impact to a short poem.
Thanks for entering!
~Cassie




