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An edge of despair





Coffee tears,
desire to remain in bed,
morning's sad announcing.





















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Prompt; 10 words, inspired by the word "breakfast".

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  • And Hyetal
    February 24, 2008

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    Sad write! But I really like your phrase "coffee tears"... Really made an impact.

    Thanks for entering!

    ~Cassie