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Uhh..

In
shock


Living
every
day


with fear


knowing
the next moment
would bring
hurt


childhood memories
blank


expect the ones
you 
took

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    February 27, 2008

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    OMG! This is soo sad, your last lines "childhood memories blank expect the ones you took" are so powerful, I am sure that there are many that can relate to this write, congrats on the silver.


  • Exodus gold member
    February 27, 2008

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    You already know I think this is amazing. Seriously impressive write sis. Reminds me of screaming in the night.

    Thank you


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    wow sis this is a powerful piece and your words have truly captured the prompt with a darkness and emotion. hope your ok love you