Symphony of colours orchestrated by autumn,
on the valley of grey red serene mountains
where the green pasture addictions in harmony
gentian thistles shudder under breezy wind.
Heavenly place of the rural spheres;
shelter a life of blessed immensity,
among whom the huge circuses, as a symphony,
echoes under a sky covered with cottony clouds.
Saw the lost hill, the hole of ancient caves,
a golden eagle majestic in steering wheel
above big collars in massif peaks.
Smelt, listened, perfume, to any whisper,
to keep senses on alert, nourished in manifesto,
read before, transcendental, to inspire me.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: 3. NATURE--
A contest entry
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2200 points, ended March 12, 2008, 28 entries
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475 points, ended April 7, 2008, 46 entries
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Comments
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Beautiful congrats on the hm
Thank you for taking the time to enter this into my contest I wish you the best of luck
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Such lovely words. I found your metaphors to be fresh and rather calming. And fall is my favorite time of year

Good Luck,
Erika


