When I look upon thee
My heart skips a beat
How I love the sweet serenade
Of your tiny little feet...
Yours is the colour of Mother Earth
Skin brown and earthly hue
Eyes that shine like fertile soil
For you there is nothing I wouldn't do...
Your smile is like the break of dawn
You bring warmth and light to my day
And when you hold me in your little arms
I feel those words you are trying to say...
Princess Of Persia, Sweetest Tiyana
I will always be your warrior til death
I will give my all to keep you safe baby
And in defending you I would give my last breath...
So when the world is cold to you
When ignorance bruises your pride
Just call my name and I will be there my Angel
Sword drawn ready and forever by your side...
Dedicated to Tiyana, the daughter of my beautiful woman... Thank you so much for helping me overcome my inner doubts and fears, for loving me unconditionally, and for giving me a life I never believed I could have... I love you, and I always will X
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This is truly a beautiful poem. This little sweetie has captured your heart it seems. How fortunate for the three of you that you've been brought together
A lovely, meaningful poem
ramblin
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excellent
i truly loved this one excellently written -
Ohhh, this has a gallant mystical camlot tone to it.
It is very touching and serene.
The forth stanza is well placed.
Your notes touched this old Irish heart.
I could not have enjoyed this more.
A sentimental masterpiece.
It is always such an addition to my work to have your comments, knowing what a artist you are with the english language.
I have a daughter that is 32, really wild.
You would do yourself justice to save this, she will thank you for doing so when your old and grey.
I know I would.
MANY MANY BLESSINGS,
LOWELL POE.
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