My little puppy dog is here to stay
The sort of bitch all men would love to own
Although she is a puppy when we play
In every other way she is full grown
She wears my collar curled up by my feet
She's trained to always come if I should call
A doggy bowl is filled for her to eat
Her leash is always hanging in the hall
Her skin is smooth and pink she has no fur
Her tail is mounted in a special place
And every time I fit it into her
I see a lovely smile upon her face
The animal who serves me as my pet
Has given us a life without regret!
Author notes
An English sonnet on a bondage theme. I hope you enjoy. Do not read if you don't like explicit adult poems.
In a list
A contest entry
- Bondage sexxx and love [[Options]] by hear her breathe.
1800 points, ended March 2, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ADULT ONLY PLEASE!!! Best erotica writer on AP.... by jcat.
1000 points, ended February 29, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow this was sooo nice!
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Well done Jeff,
can't believe I missed this one. Congrats to you on the silver and good luck in the other contest.
**Master Ktulu**
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A bondage sonnet ...cant say I have ever read one before but I loved it anyway lol.
It flowed so well , told great little naughty tale
Congrats on the silver, much deserving
Cindy
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Hm. I'm not seeing my comment on here...and I swear I commented on it before!! But this is a fabulous sonnet, and a wonderful take on petplay! thank you for bringing this beautiful piece to my contest.
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I love the fact that you combined a BDSM piece and a Sonnet. Very well done and it makes me curious to try this kind of play.. Thank you for entering and best of luck
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Metaphoric lines of pure vivid imagery. I adored the story it told of a lady enjoying her encounters. This is totally sexy...................loved it..
novy
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I guess I find this somewhat disturbing but well written and nice flow. I just can't say much because quite honestly I was offended but hey if you have a woman who wants to be your bitch more power to you. Nice write just not my thing. Have a good day and keep writing.
. Rewarded 6
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AWESOME WRITE HERE
Never experienced this kind of play but you make it sound kind of entertaining.....lol
hot and erotic it is
. Rewarded 4
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oh boy! How sexy is this??? I like the inuendo, and I definitely love the imagery this poem tosses out...wanna play catch?
Love, Lane
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YES PLEASE but she wouldn't do that you know.
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lol - I thought this was ADORABLE!!!!
It is playful (no pun intended!) and yet the love shines through
I enjoyed this one THOROUGHLY Jeff - truly, WELL DONE!!!!!!!
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ha ha I love how people don't understand petplay or BDSM...they think it's...sigh...but I think it's brilliant!!!!
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This is a perfectly written English Sonnet and I must admit it's one of the most gross poems I have ever read.
Love,
Amera
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{chuckling}
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On my first rerad I thought 'what's erotic about this - it's about a pet dog!' But then as I began to pay attention and got towards the middle of the piece, I saw my mistake - making assumtions, argh. This is cool and you have really trod well in terms of using descriptions that really could be, in general, about a pet, whilst in other areas the similar voacabulary keeps the theme running. Cheeky poem - well-written!
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You naughty, naughty boy!
Mistress Mairi.
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Oh no, she's the naughty one, whenever she wants a spanking...
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{Raising My eyebrow}
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Oh wow Jeff, awesome as ever, think I best hide this one from cheeky or I'll never hear the end of it. Then again... collar lead dish ya could be fun Jem
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Admit it, you'd hate her not to read it!!!
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Already posted link to her email
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Let us know the outcome!
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