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Ginger cat

Ginger cat you lay
there asleep
indifferent to your orange
fringe and copper sweep.
Bonsai tiger all the
sufferings and falsehoods
in the world do not
make you weep.

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  • LadyUnique silver member
    March 5, 2008

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    'bonsai tiger' is so clever i really like this so into the finalist list it goes and i wish you much luck from there thanks for entering