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dream on

Reality calls to us,
she says, "come, come."

Dream on.
Life is but an illusion.

We will fade into
the translucent blue
of the sky.
Leave behind the delusions,
and go beyond the looking glass.

Dream on.
Life is but an illusion.

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  • Anna Emkah
    March 1, 2008
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    Beautiful poem.
    I like the way you handled the prompt.
    Very well done.
    Anna.


  • Arizona Sunset
    February 24, 2008

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    so true life really seems to be an illusion most of the time. love it! best to you in the contest~ blessings always~ Trisha