Spinning worlds clash in everyway,
Like falling cards thrown in temper,
Whilst gloved hands never betray,
Their veiled natures...
In a list
A contest entry
- 20 / 10 / Late nite quickie by Freestyle Bushido.
300 points, ended February 24, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think and PLEASE be honest
Comments
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great imagery here... x
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"Spinning worlds clash in everyway,
Like falling cards thrown in temper"
Naw gorgeous Aunty
Well done on your bronze, well done
luffles you!
Claire x



