Hunger is the travesty,
of all time
But all the words you speak,
do not rhyme
So I tell you why don’t you,
walk through that door?
Your promises are all so sweet,
to try to keep
But we all know that your mind,
is not that deep
A faculty in motion of mind,
at this time
But all the lies that you speak
they have no rhyme
A contest entry
- Let's Talk Politics by xXblackenedXroseXx.
600 points, ended April 1, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ain't that the truth! every time I watch these debates, (by Both Parties) I keep yelling at the screen: How! How are you going to do that! where are you getting the money for these promises!?
this is the best I've seen yet, You will probably win, and it will be well deserved.
Good Luck.
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I especially love the last two lines. This is a short but sweet poem.. that can be interpreted to mean so much. Great job.
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Hey
This is a perfect poem for AP. I happen to enjoy rhyme and have been a party to some lies. Guilty as judged.
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