They splat apond my window sill
like the stagger notes on my guitar
soulful, painful , tears of joy
it starts off slow then it begins to pour
thats what happens when fools rush in
clothes soaked in wet nightmares of love affairs gone wrong
drenched in midnight passions and final given ups
but wait for the calm after the storm
there's nothing but silence
and silence is golden
morning is here
means there's a sunrise of love
Author notes
I just watched the movie....and I ran with the prompt there...hope it works well.
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Comments
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Your words have this incredible beat to them! I find the beat and then I just spit it! it's out of control crazy amazing.
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This was delightful
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