I gotta woman
A sweet, sweet woman
On my mind
I gotta woman
The sweetest woman
You'll ever find
If I could make out
It's just like take out
Everytime
Oh! I got needin's
An' the need for bleedin'
On my mind
Oh! I got them needin's
An' all the reasons
I can find
If there's a way out
I'd rather stay out
All night an' day
An' there might not be
Salvation for th' likes of me
If I fall
She's got my soul patch
Under lock, key an' latch
I'm at her bidding
At her every beck an' call
An' I got an itchin'
To get her back in the kitchen
An' cook me food
Oh! I got such an itchin'
An' so I'm pitchin'
To get her nude
I can make out
Pretend it's take out
When I'm in th' mood...
An' there might not be
Salvation for th' likes of me
If I fall
She's got my soul patch
Under lock, key an' latch
I'm at her bidding
At her every beck an' call
Author notes
Option #2: Unrequited love/lust
A contest entry
- ALL ABOUT LOVE! by lemonhead.
390 points, ended April 6, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Is It Lust, Love, Or Complete Infatuation ? PW allowed :] by innocence jaded.xx.
420 points, ended June 30, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh and could you put the option # in your authors notes? Thank you <3
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I really liked the format of this poem ! How it was so bouncy and how it was written like a song. While I was reading, I could pick out a tune in my head. Very nice.
"An' there might not be
Salvation for th' likes of me
If I fall"
Some of my favorite lines. Very unique. Thanks for entering :] <3
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I like the bluesy song feel to this one! Very creative and beautiful! Best wishes in the contest!
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