I can't put my finger on it.
I couldn't explain it if I wanted to.
There's something in your eyes,
that just makes me want to be near you.
The touch of your hand,
no matter how slight,
what you say without words,
makes everything alright.
In your arms, your sweet embrace,
I've never felt so free.
I love the way that with you,
I'm allowed to just be me.
Author notes
unconditional love, you love me for me
marciakay81
A contest entry
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Comments
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A beautiful piece of writing
Well done and thank you for taking the time to enter x
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Love this poem. I personally really relate to the first stanza, seeing as you can't explain why you feel -or even what- you just DO. Really great flow and feel, and it just packs a beautiful emotional punch. Well done.
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Thnaks for entering this in my contest. Being near and dear to the ones we love means happiness for so many of us. This is a great write.
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Sometimes we don't know what we are feeling especailly in love and personally for not knowing what your feeling, there is tons of feeling put into this poem. Beautiful love poem. Good punctation as well.
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oh my gosh i love this poem i mean i want to text my man it now. great job! this poem reminds me so much of my boy and i...seriously. its a great feeling to look at someone and know exactly what they are thinking without words, wonderful job.
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loved it
i like the way it tells about the feelings and how you can be just you, a lot of people exspect others to change for them, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy
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I wrote a poem trying to figure
out this feeling once, but you
did a much much much better job than
I did. I have to say I like the
second stanza.
The touch of your hand,
no matter how slight,
what you say without words,
makes everything alright.
It does make everything alright.
Doesn't it? Good luck!
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Excellent
Well worded & versed and best of luck in the contest!
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Beautiful!
Wow! It's like you read my mind about the way I feel about my man. This has really touched me.
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All you need is love,da da da da da da...
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ha. ha.
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I enjoyed the poem
last stanza
I think explains what love is;
well at least for me.
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Unconditional love is the most pure. Well penned! Best wishes in the contest!
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