their presence frightens me
with their forms and shadows
with their whispers and screeching
when i cant see
i am stuck sensing them around me
im crazy and restless
sleepless when they surround me
i just want to breathe
how do they find me
when will they leave me alone
why are the living and the dead
stuck on the same plane
what happend to heaven and hell
am i the only one
where are the others like me
straining tiring
i need relief
A contest entry
- Have you ever had a paranormal experience? by Ethereal One.
900 points, ended March 10, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It is a bothersome experience to have ghosts around you, but I would imagine there is a reason. They may be trying to get your help, or they may have been people who lived in your home before you, and maybe died there.
I enjoyed reading this, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Ethereal One
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nice poem, you capture your emotions well... I wonder... could they want help, maybe? Just a suggestiong...
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I personally can't say how I feel about ghosts either way. I have never seen one nor do I want to... I don't know if I believe in them or not, but I would prefer not to
This was very interesting to read... I would need relief too! Good luck in the contest.
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Really interesting write...
Maybe you are supposed to help them? Just a thought..
Best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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