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Woman's Thirst



Pouty lips seek tender breasts;
her womb's delicate fruit drinks.
In trusting hold of infant fingers,
her eternal yearning quenched.

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20 words; Prompt "Delicate".
What more delicate, than the eternal thirst for motherhood in every woman, and its happy quenching at the sight of her womb's fruit?

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  • Grey Mouser
    February 26, 2008

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    With much sacrifice and a grand amount of nurturing this young person grows strong in the love of the mother and familiy. Nicely written and thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser