Many expressive looks come from a glance
Never a dull moment
Look deeply into my eyes my friend
There is whom I know
Love radiates like moon lite
The desire for acceptance shows through
Touch me with your aura
Seek me and I'll be there
I see God in your eyes
His familiar look of warmth
The eternal account of blessing
The mirrors to your soul
Beware of those that have none
You'll see it in their eyes
Author notes
The glow of the believer!
A contest entry
- when you look into a persons face do you see god by raggyann.
500 points, ended February 28, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
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Thanks for the compliments. Happy you enjoyed my poem. Don
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what a lovely poem,it depicts the judges search as it is nice and decisive, mOONS
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Thank you MoonShadow for the compliment on my poem. Happy you enjoyed it my friend, Don
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oh my this is beautiful
i love this one
this is going to be a hard one for mme to jjdge
thank you for entering my contest
i think your right on top of what i wanted
for this contest
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Thank you raggyann for the inspiring comment and compliments on my poem! So happy you liked it too! Thanks again, Don
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The eyes are the keys to our souls. I have always thought you can see who a person is by their eyes. Amazing write wonderful imagery. Good luck in the contest. Niaish for sharing
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Thank you tawk for the wonderful comment and compliments on my poem! Happy you liked it, Don
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The glow of an unbeliever...the eyes a mirror to the soul...love radiates like moon lite...sighs...yes it does
out standing my friend!
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Thank you my dear Tender Wolf! So happy you liked it. A special thought for you! Great site we have to communicate on with others. Thanks again, Don
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the window to your soul is through your eyes...I believe this...beautiful poem, best to you in the contest ~blessings always ~ Trisha
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Thank you Trisha for the wonderful comment and compliments on my poem! Happy you liked it too! Don
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Hi Bubs,
What a great job you did on this one! The eyes tell many things, don't they? One can not easily hide their true selves, as the eyes... All telling. And some always scream... with pain, or with love. What ever the soul is saying...
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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Thank you Nyetta for the generous comment and compliment on my poem!! Glad to here you liked it too! I agree, Don
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I really like this. I like to see a persons eyes, they can't keep things from showing in their eyes from the innocence of a child's to the wisdom of an elderly person. Well done for this my friend and niaish for sharing it with us here. Sheila
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Thank you Sheila for such an excellent comment and compliments on my poem!! happy you liked it. Don
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Niaish Ma eno from all your Children, when you look into eyes there you can see heart and soul, those of compassion,love and time for others, those of greed, hate, or anger and those who are lost, sad, neglected or hungry.It is the middle group I believe I would trouble to see the Gods face in, but who am I to judge, He can work miracles who really knows, we have only to look to the Old Testament and the parables and morals taught within to see how wrong a judgement this can be. Never should a face be taken at its own merit/value! Great write, thought provoking...
Kindest thoughts and wishes, Anna-Marie.
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Thank you Anna Marie for the wonderful comment and compliments on my poem!! Happy you liked it and that it leaves thoughts to ponder on. Don
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