Young and beautiful
Still so simple, still so true
You haven’t lost your mystery
You’re still holding on to innocents
You still look to things to come
I see your eyes still sparkle
I see you still believe
Please don’t lose this thing you have
You’ll miss it when it’s gone
Your Sweet innocents
You lost a while ago
But I still see it
In your smile, the way you talk
The way you still blush
When a man smiles just right
You maybe a woman
Sexy sometimes exposed
But I still see your innocents
Hiding deep inside of you
Author notes
Was two poems combined them, For the young at heart.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Poem for a Beloved Daughter?
I love this very sensitive, honest, and loving poem... Thank you for sharing such intimate thoughts with us.
Peace, Cyn


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very nice
charlie nice to see you back at writing nice combo of words does fit some woman good luck mary
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So sweet, sucha good write, and sometimes when taking a few poems and adding them together makes them even more... And this poem says so much in so few words .


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Nicely done and wonderfully put..the young at heart carry something in them that tends to sparkle..I like the line you still blush when a mansmiles just right. Would comment further on that line..but I will blush for revealing my own thoughts. Wonderful write and joy to read.


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