hands linger
over the delicate goose-flesh
of finely frozen arms;
chilled down to the marrow.
Author notes
Yeah, so I'm not feeling very deep right now, I'm feeling freezing though.
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest Quickie by Kari.
300 points, ended February 23, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"hands linger "
Something about this....I sense...I feel...that this is...
Its deep, powerful, sensual...simple
The image of hands lingering...could mean so many different things...could mean nothing at all
But hands lingering....lingering for warmth
This simple piece has brought a sort of simple reflective ease to my soul
One day girl... soul will come....a light will shine...to warm those lingering hands
Very insightful!!!
Keep them comin!
Much Love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This may not be the deepest poem you've ever written but it's still amazingly well done. You did however make me want a jumper.
Congrats on the trophy (though I'm not surprised in the least)
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All I was feeling was cold last night.
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awsome take
congrats on gold
blessed be -
I was already feeling cold to start with, I am no even colder. LOL
you did a great take on the prompt.
alas another one in need of these.
350 billion
s for you
kat
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cold and tired. uh huh. definately a truth.
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lol, very good write, definitely affects the reader!
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oh wow... I love you descriptions... With very few words ~ You made even me feel cold.. hehe...
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brrr I think I'll need to go and get some more coffee now lol I feel what you're feeling and I thank you for that
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It is freezing here also hands you a nice Capi lol Good luck to you in her contest best wishes and muhc love always
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