To my goddess who hides from light
Yet thrives in the shadows of night
I give my soul to my Dark Queen
And all the evil you have seen
I pledge to myself to do what I do
All the pain and suffering is to you
I hope you will accept my tribute of blood
Not from those of pure but muck and mud
Not many think what you do is right
The evil you spawn in the night
I however bathe in this sight
When Paladine's light is too bright
I will spread your name to more like us
I will do my best to make you infamous
You may be one of three
But you fill evil hearts with glee
Many souls of evil will come to you
Many claim to know what to do
However they don't know what is in store
For it is pain, torture, and more
However this is what I will answer to you
I will have a tribute to soothe your coo
May it be blood or souls of no light
I will make sure to worship the night...Takhisis
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Comments
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cool. this was an interesting read BUT, i don't see how it reflects your views of the world. maybe this digs a little deeper and i'm wading in shallow water, but...well, a goddess of darkness and hatred. that's powerful. i did like how you rhymed. it reminded me of a far more mature version of a childrens' poem. best of luck and good write.
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I love this! It was very vivid, and the flow was wonderful.
I like this the best:
I hope you will accept my tribute of blood
Not from those of pure but muck and mud
great job!
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