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[ A roof, walls, and windows... ]

A roof, walls, and windows...
Typical house, right?
Add family and some pets
A home exists.
Or does it?

Fighting and yelling
Arguments are the daily special
A broken heart
Shattered and bleeding

Peace and happiness
Love at last
Whole again
One day, maybe...

A roof, walls, and windows...
Typical house, right?
Add family and some pets
A home exists.
Will it ever?

Author notes

Please don't critize my poem. It doesn't flow and I don't care. It is not well organized and neither am I.

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  • I AM SpokenFor
    February 25, 2008

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    This is a very genuine poem; it doesn't matter whether it flows or not. It is what you feel and it is very honest. That is what matters in poetry, no matter what anyone tells you.

    I love you, Little One.