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Dolphins (The Brevette)

Dolpnins
D e v o u r
Sushi.

Author notes

Tha Brevette.Three word poem consisting of a noun(subject)verb(action) noun(object)The verb's letters are spaced to indicate ongoing action.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 26
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    Oh I am glad they do not me. Raw fish is disgusting.


  • rinzurajan
    May 18
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    cute and done really well...but i wonder do the dolphins only devours sushi...???

    good luck


  • GypsyEyes
    June 1, 2008

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    hahaahaa this was just too cute! i love it! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox


  • Pollycheck
    May 16, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. this is a great poem with a great "aha" moment in the last line.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 13, 2008

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    Well When I said brevity you took it to heart lol Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 25, 2008
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    Wow, this is really short; I never heard of this form either thanks for sharinglol


  • my1lovewearsdiapers
    April 9, 2008
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    MMMMMMM sushi!!! This is short and cute best of luck


  • Midnight-Engaged
    February 24, 2008
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    The truth in your words in overwhelming. Never let them silence you.


  • g-tonttu
    February 24, 2008
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    Indeed they do

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