The words won't escape
They won't let loose
They can't get free
They've been trapped inside
My hollow throat.
But they're almost ready
Almost ready to explode.
All they need is one thing
ONE SIGNAL
TO START A FIRE
that leads to MY EXPLOTION!!!
Author notes
I felt every ounce of me, screaming out
But the sound was trapped deep in me
unfinished for now
A contest entry
- *~Prompt Inspired~* by RainbowGirl257.
500 points, ended March 8, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - HELP ME!!!!! by ShadowsDream.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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touching
i like they way things are bottled up, then they explode, nice flow, keep writing, -Amy
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Write on
Write on young poet the words will come and when they do the flood gates will open for the beauty and power of words and the light shining for you the new poet
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this is an absolutely wonderful poem, its great as it is, but if you added some more that would be great!
I can almost feel and sense you trying to speak out.
good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
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