mirror society’s paranoia.
Cultivating Nirvana’s essence,
I travel beyond flesh
poised in love’s conviction.
Fused, willingly to you.
Sterile attributes
mirror society’s paranoia.
Cultivating Nirvana’s essence,
I travel beyond flesh
poised in love’s conviction.
Fused, willingly to you.
mirror society’s paranoia.
Cultivating Nirvana’s essence,
I travel beyond flesh
poised in love’s conviction.
Fused, willingly to you.
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A deep profound proclaimation of compassion.Yes and if that's not the truth of the cold clinical way most do precieve the human equation,I'll eat my hat! So... much said in short order here. Nice work,
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Oy!!
Oh My~ this one brought some images
Beauty~~
Love the words: Sterile attributes...
and love's conviction
also travel beyond flesh...
Powerful image~
Woooooooo Hooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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whoa!! now this is indeed something far more than just words. To place thoughts such as these, a oneness within your own self has to be realised, and the heart and soul simply has to be true, to be able to send the message on.
Breaking free from what holds us back, stepping far beyond the hidden fences of our minds, and grasping hold of the emotions felt without hidrance. To know that future days are just a build up to what lies after, and silently wait without fear of what is to come.
You create a world within words that some may never discover Gypsy, simply brilliant.
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Excellent write!!!!! very emotion filled and each word seemed perfectly chosen for it's place!!! I enjoyed this read very much!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!!!
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I absolutely love for a poet to just say it. That's what you've done here my friend. No hesitations, nothing to be fearful of. I keep thinking about how much fear we live under and have come to realize that I am truly afraid of very little. You see I am aware of forces greater than me that have a definite control over happenstance. I also realize there is no such thing as coincidence. The fact that you are in touch with your spiritual nature is what makes you who you are, and what makes this poetry read with so much light and uplift.
Congratulations on receiving the Bronze. Excellent writ dear sister.
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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Love the black background.....goes so very well with the intent of the words upon the screen, if one knows the meaning. Been there myself - tis a Lovely place to be, isn't it?
Blessings to you dear - it's been much too long!
Love,
~ ~ Janet ~ ~
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Guarded just won't get us there,will it? External sky rocketeering in faith of the antisipated leap into the realms of passion can.That's what this says to my heart anyway. Riviting piece Poetess!
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Fused, willingly to you.
yes ..entering the soul of the poet's into the unknwon spirtual zone is quite evident in the words as determined ..a great poem indeed...
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Excellent
Powerful expression. so very well done. Congratulations on the bronze.
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I found this to be soft and gentle. Like a sigh of surrender as one departs from chaos and lands gently in the presence of Love!
Excellent work,
Marianne
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wow!
tam you deserved to have won more than a bronze on this one! the others must have been really something.., cause this one was outstanding!
mike -
Had a hard hitting style to be so short. I liked.
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Hard hitting, truthful and straight!
There is just no other way to put it.
This sounds very much like something I would write.
I do love when our minds meet like this
Thank you for entering.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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to escape the crazy world at times we have to free the mind and fly with love's wild feathered wings, a good poem
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powerful
such an amazing powerful piece in so few words! you pack a punch like none other. the last line grabs me hard "fused, willingly to you." definately this is worthy of Gold!
many blessings *stomps
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brilliant
the most honest and hard-hitting piece I've read in awhile...conviction really is like that
all this with just a few words..color me amazed
best wishes
peace and hugs
Muddy
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