Your sweaty body on top of me,
Your blue eyes are all I can see.
You kiss my lips so tenderly.
You touch my body oh so passionately.
The hard floor underneath us.
Your breath so brusque.
The air so tight and musk.
The lighting so dim from dusk.
I wake from a hot sweat.
For it seems our bodies recently met.
For this I would never forget,
Where you made me so wet.
Unfortunatly it was only a dream.
But as it would seem,
The feeling is still extreme.
In frustration I scream.
For you are not there,
My sleeping cuddly bear.
I cry in despair,
For our love is so rare.
hmm, can you feel yourself inside the dream?
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Oh. This is quite some poem that you have going on here. lol It sounds like you were having a frustrating time, being in love and lust with someone. They sound like a new lover or something but maybe you're just the overly passionate type. I thought you did a good job of expressing that.
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Nice
Ok I get the frustration, I am feeling a little of it. Amazing write and something unfortunately I can relate to. VERY WELL DONE -
WOW! That is pretty much all I can say...WOW! I love this poem! It is great and I can actually see this happening! It seems so real instead of just a dream!
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This is a great poem.
You are a great poet.
What was your inspiration for writing this poem?
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touching beautiful real for us the reader its like you can it be in this dream we are! this makes me think of the one i love thank you for sharing lovely indeed
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Mmmm this sounds like a very nice dream, defiantly not one I would want to wake up from. Very nicely written!
~K~
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