my heart goes boom,
my head goes crazy.
i've got inspiration about to explode.
my vocal chords do vibrate
my voice does sing.
i've got the gift of sound.
i feel trapped in the air waves,
but i'm dancing in the streets
with all the signs and dotted lines following me.
i've got stuff inside, but
it's just easier to cry,
i'll make it rain, make it rain.
just looking for the pleasure in company.
my ears, yeah they listen,
but half the time i don't care.
everyones there yet i'm lonely
my voice trapped in the air waves yet again.
my walls are filled with posters;
they brighten up my mood
cause i know there's tons of fiction
in this lonely little world;
its easier to live.
yet i'm looking for the pleasure in company.
i feel trapped in the air waves,
but i'm dancing in the streets
with all the signs and dotted lines following me.
i've got stuff inside, but
it's just easier to cry,
i'll make it rain, make it rain.
just looking for the pleasure in company.
Author notes
This is quite the weird piece I find. I bet it will be confusing to most. While I was writing it after every line I would think, "does this go with what I'm trying to convey? Gosh. Meh, I like it." Everything makes sense to me though. =D
Just to give you some guidence, this poem is basically about the thrills of love and the downfalls. Like at points you think it's fiction while you're feeling it, because everything has turned to the brightside; while at the same times thinking, "Why do I feel this way?" Actually, the line "looking for the pleasure in company," has many different meanings to me; those meanings also expressed throughout the poem.
I've also been learning a bunch of new songs on my guitar, which are so fun and relaxing to play, and I wanted to incorperate that feeling into this.
On another note, I don't usually write with no capitals, but I have been doing it a lot lately with my poetry I post up here, because I don't know, I feel it just has this youth quality.
Can you tell I don't want to do my chemistry homework?
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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hahaha!
I like this so much its so freestyle. & to me it doesn't feel so sad to be loney. Like it has freedom and love and just this going out on your own acoustic-heart thing going on. This would be a beautiful song sung by a girl with her feet dangling out the back of a struck with her guitar painted with flowers going to the beach. With lots of pretty hair.
I just like the freshness in this and the meanings run deep too and are touchable. Fantastic♥
xo<3
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Yeah, I was hoping to get that across when I almost talk about how being alone is so cruel, but "looking for the pleasure in company" kinda switches the meaning of the words before it; that its ok to feel lonely, and you don't have to be sad.
Thank you for all your comments! =D
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