Come, come my love from the world of no dimension.
Dance with me and take my heart to have and keep.
Break passed my dreams before they can mention
that you only survive in my deepest sleep.
Take away this veil of hate the world left behind.
Reach out from the pastels in which you stay.
Yet this prayer I say still can't help me find
he who haunts my mind from so far away.
Author notes
This was inspired by Frodofan. She was telling me about this male character from a story she wrote. She's really good with her imagination and she painted him. Well that inspired this. It's rough but I wanted to get it down before I forgot it.
Please tell me what you think
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Hood-Wink!
I like the softness of your lines, and love the title...your rhyme helps the flow, especially in the first stanza, but most of all you keep it simple while expressing so much
You have been ambushed by a fellow Bandit
Love and smiles
~Lilac
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Wow... this is me!
I'll show you the painting soon.
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Beautiful
I think the best line is "Break passed my dreams before they can mention that you only survive in my deepest sleep. -
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Thank you.
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