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Love Is....

Love is such a gentle word
It's soft and oh so sweet
Love is always a gentle touch
When two lovers meet

Love is me holding you
Close to my breast so tight
Love is kissing and hugging you
All through the lonely night

Love is holding your hand so firm
As we walk along in the moonlight
Talking and laughing and sharing our ways
As we hold our love safe with our might

So darling may we always
Treasure our love so true
For I love you and you love me
May we share this our whole life through

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  • larkbird
    March 30, 2008

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    This is such a charmingly sweet poem, that reads almost like a love letter. It packs an emotional punch as well, which is a talent. It also tells the truth about love that so many seem to have missed out on. Well written, I enjoyed this one.
    Good luck and God Bless


    • Katie Lazette
      March 30, 2008
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      Thank You larkbird

      Your comments are greatly appreciated. I'm also glad you enjoyed reading my poem.

  • cindy4
    March 21, 2008
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    Really nice sweet poem.


  • captain howdy
    February 24, 2008
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    Aww, this one is so pretty and sweet! Great job rhyming too! Best wishes in the contest!