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Desire

Tempting lust
Darkened erotic
Entrancingly sensual
With venom of carnality
Bring forth the sacrifice
Amour

A contest entry

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  • Nighttime angel
    March 2, 2008
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    this is an amazing poem, I love it. you did a great job with this.. I love the last 3 lines.

    thank you for entering and good luck

    kat


  • creationsfromheart
    February 25, 2008

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    this is a good write, I went and read the other entries in the contest as well, and there were some really good entries. and yours was wonderful as well.


  • jcat gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    I can not believe that this didn't win a trophy!! It was incredible!!!! I love it and hope you get one in this contest cause you rocked this!!!


  • hoodoolover silver member
    February 23, 2008
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    Wowzer, this is really most excellent, I smell gold...(does gold have a smell?)

  • Nighttime angel
    February 23, 2008

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    This is

    amazing. I love your take on the prompt. I love the last 3 lines. outstanding job.

    good luck

    kat

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