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On St. Patricks Day

It’s Saint Patrick’s Day once again
And another whole year has passed by
Since the day I walked among the woods
And something unusual caught my eye

I spied a very strange little fellow
The queerest creature I’ve ever seen
He wore a belt of the brightest yellow
And his clothes were Emerald green

He danced and sang with joyful glee
Acting as though he had not a care
I don’t know if he was aware of me
But carried on as though I wasn’t there

He danced like a child although he was old
Then I saw what he was dancing around
Before my eyes there was a pot of gold
And a leprechaun jumping up and down

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This entry is more about the background rather than the poem, but the contest asked for a poem to accompany it.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 3, 2008

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    Great job with this was put together nicely excellent poem to go along with it as well. Redwing Spirit


    • Sapphire gold member
      March 5, 2008
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      RedwingSpirit

      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my entry I am glad you liked it so much. Your comment and applause are appreciated.

      Sapphire

  • piccola silver member
    March 3, 2008

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    I love the write and the collage BG too. It's a little hard to read the text though. Thanks a lot for taking the time to enter.


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      March 5, 2008
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      abear

      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem and background, I am glad you liked them both

      Sapphire


  • XXirishroseXX
    February 28, 2008

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    still, this is a really cool poem, and I LOVE the background!

    woot, st.patrick's day!


    • Sapphire gold member
      February 28, 2008
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      XXirishroseXX

      Thank you for reading and commenting on my entry It took a lot of adjusting and editing to get it right, but I finally got there in the end.
      Your comment and applause are appreciated

      Sapphire

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