Have you ever....
Cried for days at a time?
got fed up but said you were fine?
wrote down your feelings to express how you feel;
but couldn't quite grasp it although it was real?
Hid under the covers til' the day passed you by?
Felt on the edge but didn't know why?
Took a razor to your arm?
felt the sensation than put it down.
If you have
then I wish to say...
this is my life
have you ever felt this way?
A contest entry
- AP FAMILY STARTING by forever and ever.
300 points, ended June 25, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i've done this so many times.
you didn't put what you wanted to be in the box though hun. -
yes i have felt exactly like this and i am happy that i am getting over some of my issues that i have had and my friends are like cool with me now instead of being freaked so its all good
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i have felt this way and i completly understand what you mean...i think that this is very good
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OMG!!
its just how i feel
I cant believe it
your poem made me cry
Its like...expresses so well ur feelings...
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My my my.....
This is my life as well, everything is extreemly discriptive. This is a great write. I love it.
Keep up the great work.
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