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Organisation XIII

A noble leader with pride and joy
in a team of thirteen I belong
to capture hearts to become one

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Xemnas in contest Organisation VIII

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  • peridotPixi
    February 28, 2008
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    thats what teams are

    cool, congrats on winning, ive never won anything yet, keep writing, -Amy


  • Lady Altheia
    February 23, 2008

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    I am notsure whio Xennas is. If you played the video game Kingdom Hearts, there is a Organization 13 in there. Not sure if that is what you mean. Congrats on the hm.


  • N e a r
    February 23, 2008

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    Yes, perfect poem for Xemnas
    Sincere and nicely put


  • poppa
    February 23, 2008
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    Nice effort .....good luck in this , found the prompt difficult myself....


  • Valley Girl silver member
    February 23, 2008
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    This is awesome hun! Great take!

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