gashes of bitter memories
etched forever in time
by the spear of Satan
replace my ancient scars
with freshly flowing droplets
of sinful hatred
dripping in slow motion
from slices of death
along my torn apart lips
to my tainted red sheets
Author notes
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Based on Picture by Insomnia at Deviantart
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A contest entry
- I think I am Dead. by Abby In Chains..
350 points, ended February 23, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The sadness has consumed me and now I see nothing else... by Leanna-bean.
475 points, ended July 1, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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WoW! The imagery in this piece is incredible.
"Freshly flowing droplets of sinful hatred". I love it. Great write! -
I really like this...It is so feel of emotion, and it leaves you really wanting more! Thank you so much for the entry and good luck!
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