Look at my face, see the bruises?
See the pain, the hurt, and shame
This is what life did to me...
Author notes
Saw the marks on her face 'n they to me represented the scars on inside from life....the scars that no one sees.
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/25 QUICKIE! by Nighttime angel.
465 points, ended February 23, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well, what do you think?
Comments
1 - 14 of 14
-
Well Written
It happens to the best of us.
-
Touching!
Emotional words! Good verses to explain the portrait.
Congrats on the Bronze dear Sis...
-
Cold
Cold hard facts in a short tragic write. The abuse continues in the name of love and humaity. I ,therefore, take a pass on life
-
Very Potent.
Painted this portrait within few vivid words.
Well versed, and congrates on placing in this contest!
Peace, Timothy
-
Yes !
Very powerful piece here . -
Damn that's powerful hun... yes, the scars inside are unseen and often as painful as the ones that can be seen!
Good work. well done on the trophy!
-
aww I liked this one!! Good job and yeah it feels like it represents me too really powerful..keep writing!
-
i love you sister
congrats on broze
this was really powerful -
this is amazing.. you did an outstanding job with the prompt. I like your take on the prompt.. I love the last line in your poem..
good luck
kat
-
Well done, strong ending! good luck in the contest
-
Nice job on this I enjoyed it. Great take on the prompt and best of luck!
-Steve- -
Beautiful! Short but powerful and deep. I love you and best of luck in the contest!
-
wow this one hit close to home here..I think you did wonderful and it's deep with emotion..best of luck in the contest
-
Your is great. I have moved beyond my pain. My scars are there but they are healing.
Adding your comment:
1 - 14 of 14
