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Beguiled





Demon spawn
        trips traps set
  from insidious plots planned,

as hands,
    serve cold justice
          in shadow's play
    with telekinetic withery.






Author notes

Prompt: characater from video game series KINGDOM HEARTS (Larxene)

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  • Ryno
    February 24, 2008

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    Apparently, according to M a r l u x i a, we were both very close. I see no friggin way how! I don't know how you managed to get ideas like that out of the picture... really, really great work Bel! Congrads on the Gold Cup!!!


    Ryan


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    February 23, 2008

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    Wow very well written from a video game inspiration. Definitely deserved gold ma, congrats.
    Love you,
    Lil


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 23, 2008
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    Wonderfully done.
    Congrats on the gold.
    Be Well


  • M a r l u x i a
    February 23, 2008

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    This is so wicked! (in a good way )
    I can see Larxene from reading this...
    LOVE IT


  • masterblaster gold member
    February 23, 2008
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    Hi, nice one squirrel, Di

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