The angel watches over me
each and every day
especially when I need help
and he will come my way.
The angel will keep flying
they'll hover at my side
to love and help me out.
They'll gently lead me to guide.
But on one day the angel
has fallen from the sky
from the heaven above
and I didn't see him fly.
Sometimes the angel
might gently touch me
to be a touched by angel,
and that angel, I can't see.
Please tell me what you think
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Very lovely Kim
keep writing dear, you are getting really good 
Thank you for always sharing your blossoming talent.
Ephiphany
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i like this better,it has alittle more flow, and alittle more imegery, and the begining is less confusing, the last two lines, not sure about, the lines themselves aren't bad, i like them, but it doesn't sound like and ending.
Great improvment
keep it up and good luck in this thing we call life.
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Very good write.
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Nice title. Good rhyming. I think this poem sort of does flow.
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