Colliding conditions,
swivel to face me:
allow only indifference
within tight frames
the clockwork
of this ugly routine.
Reduce
reduction.
Author notes
Text is small but I believe it says:
"Roxes"?
Wait, no, I asked my brother:
"Roxas"
Anyway,
yeah, this sucks.
I just wrote what came out.
A contest entry
- Quickie PIF 13x20x30 by M a r l u x i a by N e a r.
650 points, ended February 23, 2008, 11 entries
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No this does NOT suck!
I loved the part where you included time..
Reminds me of his character.
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Thank you very much.
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Loved the last line especially, interesting idea... has some cool thoughts behind it. Good luck to you!
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Thank you.
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