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Fresh

Stop to smell the flower
A small reminder of hope
All that's good and right
The rain brings
Fresh flowers...

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Color of flower reminded me of the word, "refresh"...

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  • Grateful
    October 30
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    just wonderful...enjoyed the fragrance of your poem...all the best..


  • Ellis gold member
    July 28
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    Good poem

    Flowers are nice.


  • HeavenScent4U
    February 28, 2008

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    i thought this was wonderful but somehow i got stuck on the last line probably just me, ignore this lol best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


    • TheClimb
      February 28, 2008
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      No, it's probably not just you, probably a few people who feel that way. But the last line is saying that after the rains in life persay, there's flowers...which means the good things return....dunno if this helped, let me know.

      Blessings always...


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    February 23, 2008
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    Very wonderful HUGS XXX


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 23, 2008

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    So true and a wonderful
    reminder to us all!
    Good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Hope Angel silver member
    February 23, 2008

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    Beautiful! Best of luck in the contest and I love you! Love the pic btw!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 23, 2008
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    lovely

  • Nighttime angel
    February 23, 2008

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    wow this is so much better than mine.. God, I love this, its so beautiful..

    you did an excellent job

    good luck

    kat

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