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Demyx




For breakfast
I eat jewels
and drink exhaust.
But I still blend
into the crowd
like grass
in sorrow’s field.












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Demyx

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  • bones7
    February 24, 2008
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    Very nice.
    Short but sweet.
    Love your style so abstract and brilliant.


  • N e a r
    February 23, 2008

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    Rich imagery...
    love the blending part...
    like water. Which is his element.


  • Lj-
    February 23, 2008
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    Wow, really interesting.
    Very different.

    Best of luck.