It's not his actual features
His beautiful eyes, his cute mouth
It's not the clothes he wears
His black blazer, his blue jeans
That's not what makes him beautiful
[No not even close to why]
It can't be his smooth voice
That makes me completely speechless
It can't be the way he looks at me
That makes me shiver from head to toe
That's not why he's so amazing
[Of course that's not it]
The beauty is within his soul
The deep caring person that he is
With all his complex emotions
Like the true love he has for me
Yes that's why he's so beautiful
[Is it only obvious to me?]
Looks has nothing to do with it
Clothes is just an outward appearance
It's the honesty which he holds
It's the purity of his soul
That what makes me love him so much
[There's no reason for me not to]
[This is True. Beauty.]
Author notes
The reason why I love you sooo much ♥
A contest entry
- A rose without beauty by poet007.
650 points, ended February 23, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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This is such an amazing poem. I love it. HAHA, I think it might be even better than my love poems. Love ya!
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cwm
I like this poem it seem all to felmeluer I love my little flower I miss her every day I know how feel to long
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